Reviews For Under Construction
Reviewer: lyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2008 6:51 AM Title: Between the Lines

I loved this fic. I loved how Sara explored Michael's tattoo when he wasn't in control. I loved you explained all that. I loved Michael's line about how Sara was abusing him and his weakness. I can just see him saying that and for some reason I find it hilariously funny.

I found it a very enjoyable read. Thanks for posting it.

Author's Response: He doesn't complain that hard about the so-called abuse though, does he? *g*
I'm glad you found it in character and liked it. Thanks so much for your kind comment :)

Reviewer: vivian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 12:08 AM Title: Between the Lines

I love your writing. The way you used the words and the flow of the story is beautiful. Love it very much.

The only different is you used gargoyle instead of devil. But i know in different country, they call different so whenever i read gargoyle i know you mean devil.

LOL, I still love it. Thanks for writting.

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually meant gargoyle (I mention the devil, or rather the demon, at some point). Thing is, I cheated: as far as I know there's no gargoyle in the tattoo, I made it up because I needed it *g* I should probably warn about that in the author's notes :-p

Reviewer: SkyBel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 7:05 PM Title: Between the Lines

“The things you’re doing to this angel...” His words become clear, but his voice is still rough with sleep. “... there are divine laws prohibiting it, you know.”

Wow, what a beautifully written little fic.  I simply loved it, especially the above line.



Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Danni18 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 1:09 AM Title: Between the Lines

Great story, so playful and fun. I also loved the talk of the tatoo, we never get to see it anymore.

Author's Response: Regarding the tattoo, I cheated - no gargolye as far as I know, but well... *g* I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your comment :)

Reviewer: dcook78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 12:07 AM Title: Between the Lines

Good post!!!

Dee

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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